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Get to the Point – and Win Scholarship Judges Over

Get to the Point – and Win Scholarship Judges Over

Be directive in your writing approach.

By Ryan Uricks

Aside from any special essays, there are a few subjects that should always be in your scholarship essay.

• Your financial situation. You’re asking for money, so be honest of your situation. On the other hand, don’t turn it into a sob story unless it really, truly is a sob story.
• Background and accomplishments. The scholarship committee wants to know about you and you should tell them all the good things about you. Perhaps throw in a few flaws to really shake things up.
• Your hopes and dreams. What do you plan to do in college and beyond? The committee wants to know they’re investing in someone who put their money to good use and use their education as an opportunity for personal growth.

When you first sit down to write your essay, just write. Don’t second guess yourself just yet; there will be ample time to do so in the editing stage. Right now, you should get every idea or statement down on paper. After you’re finished writing your essay, you’re really only half-way done.

Now comes the editing.
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    DesileineC

    7 days ago

    Hello, name is Desileine Cetoute and i am currently a student at Technical Career Institute. I graduated from William H. Turner Tech high school. I have been looking for a way to pay for school. My father is only one who has a job in the house and I can not depend on anybody else to help me pay for school. My mother can not work because of multiple surgeries she had giving birth. Achieving and success means so much to me and my family. When I graduated, the only thing that kept speaking in my mind is to not disappointment myself and my family. I am the first child in my parents home to graduate and boy I felt blessed walking across that stage. All I want to be able to do is to reduce the bills for my father. I need the money to at least stay on my feet until I get hired. I refuse to let finances become a barrier in front my path of education.
    During my high school, I was constantly recognized for great work and motivation to in school and do what has to be done. I had perfect attendance and was involved in many clubs, such as he Bible Club, Voices of Expression, and Ladies of Essence. Graduation was another step to my success.
    My study of field is pharmacy technician. I have a few months left because It is only 9 months. I intend on graduating also. In the pharmacy field, I learn about medicine and the uses of them. Also, I learned how to tube in an IV solution line to another, so I have experience. After I graduate, i intend on going to one of the three schools: FAMU, FIU, or FAU and receive my bachelor's in science and my PH.D. To get to one of those schools, I need some money to back me up and help me and my family. My only goal is to be successful and achieve my greatest heights in life.
    Thank you so much for your time and appreciation.

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    ninacurry

    about 1 month ago

    Hello my name is Nina Curry and I am begining a new journey at the age of 35. I was employed at one of the top automotive companies for almost 10 years making almost 6 figures a year and thought I had a way of supporting my self and family until I retired. After all I watched my father work for the same company and he provided a good life for us, so I assumed it was also a given for me. But with this ecconomy, I was one of thousands laid of in the past three years. I began working at another company that made engines, since this is what I have been doing for almost the last 10 years, and was laid off from there after five months. Being laid off from two jobs in two years made me realize the importance of continuing my education. Im am trying my best to maintain my home to the best of my ability being Im a single mother of one, and I am also the guardian of my little sister who is MRDD, a result of us losing our mother and six months later losing our father. Im going into the healthcare field beging as a nurse, for two reasons, Im a natrual care taker and very empathetic so I feel this would be an excellent career choice for me. Also there is a great need for nurses and a lot of opportunities for career grow. So far I have just completed my STNA tranning which is required to begin LPN training and Im waiting for the state to schedule my testing date to be put on STNA registry. My plan is to obtain my BA in Applied Science being a RN. Thank you so much for you time and consideration. I tried to be brief and to the point. Have a wonderful day

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    aanderson09

    about 1 month ago

    i also want to become a techer and teach young people that is my passion to help others. i want to help some one else besides myself to succeed

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    aanderson09

    about 1 month ago

    first off i would like to thank you all for the chance to share me story.
    I am an eighteen year old girl who has been on my own since i was 17. i have been through alot on my journey through these life lessons that i have learned. i had to try an work and take care of my self and do for myself with out depending on others to do so. i just want to take that next step to do what i need to do to be successful in life i hope that i will get that chance

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    toddandtoby

    2 months ago

    Thank you for your time and the opportunity to share my thoughts with all of you. I appreciate you immensely.

    My name is Pecola Colby. I am a student at South Puget Sound Community College. My GPA is 3.1. I should have all of my requirements satisfied the Fall 2010 for an Associate of Arts Degree. I will then transfer to the University of Washington - Tacoma to pursue a Doctorate Degree in Social Work.

    I am unemployed. I lost my home five years ago to foreclosure.

    I am single/divorced, African American female, sixty-four years old and head of household. I am testimony to the challenges and yes resilience related to me being socioeconomically and ethnically challenged when comparing me to the dominant culture. My observation and/or perception with social services programs is that of a system at times, lacks fairness, responsiveness and accountability to some of the families they serve. I believe it is imperative that social workers remain accessible to families for support, to establish at all costs, courtesy with integrity and respect for all people regardless of race or culture. Trust is essential and this is one way to build trust. Further, it is necessary to take appropriate and necessary steps to become as proficient as possible on cultural beliefs with protocol, respect, sensitivity and with care, to recognize cultural barriers, to embrace cultural differences and to learn how best to develop the relationship in order to provide the best possible service care.

    My interest and passion then and now is to obtain a Doctorate Degree in Social Work. My heart's desire is to become a Social Worker because I am caring, compassionate, sensitive, and believe all families/people are significant, their voice count and should be heard. Further, obtaining an advance degree will allow me to have opportunities to embrace all families and cultures including attending to their needs and providing multiple levels for services with care. I envision my role as a Social Worker to be a voice for families as they journey through various programs for services and resources in order that they receive the very best with care. I will ensure families are not allowed to wander simply because they have come to believe no one cares about then or their well being. As a Social Worker, I will serve as an Advocate for families when necessary to ensure they receive the servcies and programs best for them. I will work with families to mobilize formal and informal resources; to support family development and to make certain families are on solid ground; to allow for flexibility; and to recognize emerging family needs sand community issues.

    I began my educational pursuit with Fort Steilacoom Community College now Pierce College in 1981-1982. It was an honor and privilege to begin my educational journey with Fort Steilacoom Community College. The instructors were personal, engaging and worked as closely as necessary with students to ensure successes in the classrooms. However, without family support, eventually I became overwhelmed in my attempt to carry alone all the family and household responsibilities and I had to place my educational dream pursuit on hold until NOW. At this time in my life, however, there are no obstacles to deter or distract me from achieving a Doctorate Degree in Social Work. My vision is clear. I am determined to succeed AND I know I will be an asset as a Social Worker to any organization or organized structural body.

    From May 2004 to July 2008 I was employed with the Family Support Center in Olympia, Washington. I served as the Family Resource Specialist and assisted in meeting the needs of low-income families. My responsibilities were to work with families and support them in identifying and prioritizing their needs. I helped them identify the most appropriate resources to meet those needs and empowered them to follow through in accessing those resources. I also served as an Advocate for families when necessary and worked with case managers from other agencies to ensure a complete network of services.

    My volunteerism also demonstrates my commitment to families and communities. I serve as a Volunteer with my church, New Life Baptist Church in Lacey, Washington in many roles and functions. I have successfully brought for more than five years and with the assistance and support of a cadre of medical and non-medical volunteers, multiple services and programs to the immediate and surrounding communities in Thurston County, e.g. The Smilemobile, a mobile dental unit for children in low-income families, and fifteen years old and younger, a "FREE" Back to School Physical Examination Day, Health Fairs, Walk-a-Thons, etc. I served as Chair-person for the Unity for Excellence Tutorial Program. I also serve as Chair-person for the Senior Adult Ministry. I am an Usher.

    My efforts were recognized in the community. In April 2004, I received the Making a Difference in The Life of a Child Award from Thurston County and in June 2004, I received the Unique Achievement Award from The Thurston County Council on Cultural Diversity.

    Again thank you for your time and this opportunity. Please note I am available to respond to any queries you may have or need for clarification. Further, please know any amount of financial support is most appreciative.

    Please contact me if necessary at: 9225 Windsor Ln., NE
    Apt E-103
    Olympia, WA 98516

    OR my email address is: pediandsons@comcast.net

    Respectfully,

    Pecola Colby

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    lori_fraireyahoocom

    2 months ago

    Thank you very much .

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    4 months ago

    I would like to say first thanks for giving me a chance to apply for help .
    i recenly changed job due to my nieces and nephews,to give them a better look
    on life . To, allow them, not to settle . I haver being doing manuel laborfor sometime now,
    and i want them to know there more out there.I am out going ,and with the will to suceed.
    And I have chosen a career ,to not only, help people but also help myself. thanku.,

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    HakizimanaJ

    4 months ago

    It's a pleasure to come at your admission to tell you what should be honestly in my scholarship.so as it was required, am used to tell the truth for want it.
    in few words what am asking it's a long assistance but it's also easy for who want to help.
    so i am now here have not help because i take care my self and i gain a little salary per month so i request you to assist me. I plan to continue studies but none else could support me and i wish i i get a scholarship opportunity my plan will be accomplished, i have a bid dream to be a perfect man with knowledge and very smart on mind,reliable and updated in interesting things.
    Therefore my plan in college will be brave coz i confide my self and am talented in most of things and more and more among the communities, i will take the first to discover what should be done in any situations and able to work with colleagues across departments thus contributing to the progress of the college.

    Looking forward to receive a positive response thank you.

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    PreciousF12

    4 months ago

    good stuff

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    Gods_Gift

    4 months ago

    This kind of took a little of my fear away on writing my essay. I think I wont be as horrified of taking a leap out on faith and try my best. God never said it will be easy so I guess this gets me ready for real life.

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    KshitijN

    6 months ago

    cool